My blog is not very good. There are three reasons it.
First of all, my writing is too short. I am poor writing long sentences. So, every time my sentence is very short. I often send only picture. I should send put sentence.
Second, I send new post too late. I put off send it, so it's become complicated problems. I'm very lazy.
Third, my blog's notation is strange. It is too long toward side, so people hard to read. But, I can't change this notation. My blog is a difficult to read.
I have to change these three problems.
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2008年1月30日水曜日
2008年1月16日水曜日
About typing
I didn’t like typing before this class. However, I like typing now. Because, I am used to typing. I learned about a lot of important things for typing. For example, I should think about what want to write before write. I like write to Japanese, but I don’t like write to English. I want to more write. So I have to practice hard!! I interesting English writing now. I read a lot of English books. I want to write English picture book someday. I am going to continue to write my English class’s blog and a diary. It is my goal!!!
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[101 words]
Book review 2-18
Book review 2-17
I read "LOVE or MONEY?".
It is Molly Clarkson's fiftieth birthday. She is having a party. She is rich, but she is having a small party. She invited only four people. However, who all need her money. She will not give them the money, so they are wating for her to die. But one person can't wait. And so, on her fiftieth birthday, she is going to die.
Book review 2-16
Book review 2-15
Book review 2-13
I read "Lisa in London".
Lisa is coming to London. She takes a taxi from the air port. She is a student. She is going to learn English. That evening, Lisa talks to a student in the hotel. In the morning, Lisa goes to Delmore Street. The secretary smiles at Lisa. Mucheal comes in. He talks quickly. Lisa can't understand.
Book review 2-12
Book review 2-11
Book review 2-10
Book review 2-9
I read "Little Women".
It is a novel published in 1868 and written by American author Louisa May Alcott. The story concerns the lives and loves of four sisters growing up during the American Civil War. It was based on Alcott's own experiences as a child in Boston and Concord, Massachusetts, with her three sisters, Anna, May, and Elizabeth.
They overcome their flaws through lessons learned the hard way. Most of the flaws are in check for a time after lessons are learned, but even as young women the girls must work out these flaws in order to become mothers, wives, sisters, and citizens.
In the course of the novel, the girls become friends with their next-door neighbor, the teenage boy Laurie, who becomes a particular friend of Jo's. As well as the more serious and sadder themes outlined above, the book describes the activities of the sisters and their friend, such as creating a newspaper and picnicking, and the various scrapes that Jo and Laurie get into. The story represents family relationships and explores family life thoroughly.
In the course of the novel, the girls become friends with their next-door neighbor, the teenage boy Laurie, who becomes a particular friend of Jo's. As well as the more serious and sadder themes outlined above, the book describes the activities of the sisters and their friend, such as creating a newspaper and picnicking, and the various scrapes that Jo and Laurie get into. The story represents family relationships and explores family life thoroughly.
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Book review 2-8
Book review 2-7
2008年1月15日火曜日
Mega essay ~
I don't live in Kumamoto. I live in Fukuoka. Fukuoka is the neighbor of Kumamoto. I didn't know about Kumamoto. I looked into Kumamoto. Kumamoto has a lot of famous place.
Sightseeing
Kumamoto castle
Kumamoto Castle is a symbol of Kumamoto. It is the place that I like most in Kumamoto. Especially, I like Kumamotocastle of spring. Because there is a lot of cherry trees bloom when it is spring. Kumamoto castle was build to 1601 by Kiyomasa Katou. This is the one of the most famous castle in Japan.
It is the wall that warped diagonally. The wall is made of a lot of stones.
Suizenji park
The garden of Suizenji park is famous in the whole country. The park was build in 1632 by Tadatoshi Hosokawa. It was the rest area of a Hosokawa feudal lord called a resting booth here. This garden pleases the eyes of a tourist coming to occasions in the four seasons. Suizenji park's Garden is appointed on the natural beauty spot of the country, a historic spot.
Sightseeing
Kumamoto castle
Kumamoto Castle is a symbol of Kumamoto. It is the place that I like most in Kumamoto. Especially, I like Kumamotocastle of spring. Because there is a lot of cherry trees bloom when it is spring. Kumamoto castle was build to 1601 by Kiyomasa Katou. This is the one of the most famous castle in Japan.
It is the wall that warped diagonally. The wall is made of a lot of stones.
Suizenji park
The garden of Suizenji park is famous in the whole country. The park was build in 1632 by Tadatoshi Hosokawa. It was the rest area of a Hosokawa feudal lord called a resting booth here. This garden pleases the eyes of a tourist coming to occasions in the four seasons. Suizenji park's Garden is appointed on the natural beauty spot of the country, a historic spot.
Shirakawa source
The spring representing Aso is the Shirakawa source of a river. As for this spring, water of 60t a minute springs out. The rice of Kumamoto has reputation to be delicious, but thinks that the influence by such a water is big.
Foods
Noodle
China says with another name, Harusame soup with Chinese food which assumes fortune Ken ministry the origin with a peaceful swallow. However, it seems not to be eaten very much for some reason any place other than Kumamoto though it is Chinese food.
Horsemeat
Horse sewing is cooking I slice the flesh of the horse and distribute it, and to live directly. Sashimi of the horseflesh.
There is the custom to eat horseflesh directly in Nagano and Yamanashi, Tohoku region, but Kumamoto is known for the present as the home of the horse sewing.
Ikinaridango
Ikinari dango is native district cake of Kumamoto. Ikinaridangoh is a low price.
Conclusion
Kumamoto has a lot of good place and foods. I becoming the university student, I like Kumamoto very much.Even from now on, I am going to look into about Kumamoto more.
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2008年1月9日水曜日
Portfolio
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Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below)
Key:
Mega essay~
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
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Notes:
Student ID: 06137
(last five digits of
your student no.)
(last five digits of
your student no.)
Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, and Words
(See: Note 2, below.) Months | 08 | 09 | 10 | 11 | 12 | 01 | Totals | fn | Indices |
Book reviews | 00 | 00 | 00 | 06 | 00 | 12 | 18 | ||
Blog posts | oo | o2 | o5 | 13 | 32 | 17 | 69 | ||
Words | |||||||||
TOTAL | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- | --- |
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below) 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M | Notes |
Mega- essay 07.10.12 | Mega essay ~ | 2008.01.15 | 360 | 0 | 0 | 3 | 0 | ||
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26 | My favorite place☆ | 07.10.25 | 308 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
Movie review 07.11.11 | Movie review | 07.11.10 | 286 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 | ||
Community life 07.11.25 | Community life | 07.11.25 | 301 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
TV in Japan 07.12.09 | TV | 07.12.05 | 362 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | ||
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21 | Learning with computers | 07.12.12 | 230 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 | ||
Totals | --- | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included
M: number of other media included
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.Mega essay~
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | About Learning With Computer | 07.12.19 | 40 | |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Community life | 07.12.05 | 46 | |
2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments* |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Community life | 07.12.05 | 46 | |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | About Learning With Computer | 07.12.19 | 40 | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ||||
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
3.0. Typing Speed Trials
Showcase | Numbers of words | Dates (yy.mm.dd) |
3.1. Worst typing speed trial* | 48 | 07.11.07 |
3.2. Best typing speed trial* | 107 | 07.09.26 |
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst) | 59 | --- |
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials** | 83 | |
* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.
4.0. Book Reviews
4.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
2-01 | BROWN EYES | 07.11.14 | 20 | 0 |
2-02 | DIATY MONEY | 07.11.14 | 36 | 0 |
2-03 | HALLOWEEN | 07.11.14 | 08 | 1 |
2-04 | JENNIFER LOPEZ | 07.11.14 | 39 | 0 |
2-05 | THE ADVENTURES OF Sawyes | 07.11.14 | 0 | |
2-06 | The Phantom of the Opera | 07.11.14 | 0 | |
2-07 | The Phantom of the Opera | 08.01.15 | 23 | 0 |
2-08 | Leonardo DiCaprio | 08.01.15 | 29 | 0 |
2-09 | Little Women | 08.01.15 | 178 | 0 |
2-10 | Diana | 08.01.15 | 45 | 0 |
2-11 | 08.01.15 | 40 | 0 | |
2-12 | David Beckham | 08.01.15 | 43 | 0 |
2-13 | Lisa in London | 08.01.15 | 60 | 0 |
2-14 | GIRL meets BOY | 08.01.15 | 18 | 0 |
2-15 | SIX Sketches | 08.01.15 | 22 | 0 |
2-16 | 08.01.15 | 39 | 0 | |
2-17 | LOVE or MONEY | 08.01.15 | 68 | 0 |
2-18 | 08.01.15 | 46 | 0 | |
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4.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
Showcase | Yes | No |
5.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ||
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ||
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ||
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ||
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ||
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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5.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ||
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5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ||
| --- | --- |
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ||
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5.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.- ...
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6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
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7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
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Notes:
- This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
- The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
- This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.
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